New Sig, Please Comment

Hi, I really think there is something missing from this but I cant tell what...



I have been practicing with scan lines/grunge brushes/renders and sort of came up with this.

the render isnt much blended in with the BG... i think that the text is fine but its a lil big and maybe more attractive thanthe render as the shadow u have used in it is very clear.... and i dont like your border.. believe me, simple/cinematic (if used properly) are FTW! no border is better than those... i mean u replace ur current border with simple black border, it owuld look way better.

wht is the text again?

the font is Bellerose

And I really wasnt sure how to blend it in. I tried... And ill change the border then

This sig just dosent do it for me green

The colors look very off and the render is very large. There are too many sharp contrasting edges that draw away from your focal.

Get rid of the scan lines. Make text more subtle and smaller.