rewritable GFX Designer
Posts : 118 Join date : 2009-07-28 Age : 35
| Subject: Getting away with it Sat Aug 15, 2009 4:36 pm | |
| You thought I'm dead and inactive and you've got rid of me already? You wish! I got a little creative crisis again (some may call it lengthy hangover, which it partly is, but well...), so I only dragged myself to canvas again after almost two weeks of doing nothing. Yep, this time it's James to thank for the theme. It's half past one AM here, so I probably have missed something here, but I'll just leave it here overnight for you to rip apart. Thanks! | |
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Geopetal CnC Crew
Posts : 285 Join date : 2009-08-09
| Subject: Re: Getting away with it Sat Aug 15, 2009 4:45 pm | |
| As a member of the CnC crew, I must say the text sucks.
And I hope the RW was just a water mark. | |
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Sexercise Moderator.
Posts : 240 Join date : 2009-08-07 Age : 41 Location : B.C., Canada
| Subject: Re: Getting away with it Sat Aug 15, 2009 4:50 pm | |
| Oi...
Slump.
Overall the quality is really poor. Blending is really bad. Text is forced, poorly placed. There's no depth. The flow works, but very basic.
Compo is severely lacking and it's directly affected the concept and execution.
D+
What to do: Lose the border Lose the text Fix the entire left side Fix the LQ, sharpen it up. Work on depth Work on composition, this needs more. It looks like a wip. | |
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Radarr Sig Maker.
Posts : 194 Join date : 2009-08-08 Age : 28 Location : Britannia!
| Subject: Re: Getting away with it Sat Aug 15, 2009 4:51 pm | |
| the bubbles around the text ruins it but I'm not any good | |
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Geopetal CnC Crew
Posts : 285 Join date : 2009-08-09
| Subject: Re: Getting away with it Sat Aug 15, 2009 6:12 pm | |
| - Sexercise wrote:
- Oi...
Slump.
Overall the quality is really poor. Blending is really bad. Text is forced, poorly placed. There's no depth. The flow works, but very basic.
Compo is severely lacking and it's directly affected the concept and execution.
D+
What to do: Lose the border Lose the text Fix the entire left side Fix the LQ, sharpen it up. Work on depth Work on composition, this needs more. It looks like a wip. Easier way -- scrape it. So far the only thing I can stand to look at is the render/stock, so just start again with that. | |
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sp@rky13 GFX Pro
Posts : 279 Join date : 2009-07-29 Age : 30 Location : I think I at home
| Subject: Re: Getting away with it Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:11 pm | |
| Really harsh but i'd say true | |
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