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green.cheese
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PostSubject: Blending/C4D Practice   Blending/C4D Practice EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 1:40 pm

Blending/C4D Practice Gc6

Blending/C4D Practice Gc6e

Any improvements?
With or without border?
And I wanna put text in but I dont know where...

I guess ill get back to my BioShock sig now.


PS. Geo I cant see your messages anymore so you can say what you want Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Blending/C4D Practice   Blending/C4D Practice EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 3:07 pm

With a border and text should be on the left side just beside her head, in my opinion.

I don't know about the C4D's. Maybe someone better than me can criticize how you used them Neutral
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PostSubject: Re: Blending/C4D Practice   Blending/C4D Practice EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 3:09 pm

I think a less wide border, would look better, and I have no clue about the text Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Blending/C4D Practice   Blending/C4D Practice EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 3:10 pm

Oh, and the hair looks poorly rendered.. maybe a light smudging, or sumat?EDIT: Also, I like the pink ring around her..
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PostSubject: Re: Blending/C4D Practice   Blending/C4D Practice EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 3:16 pm

-TheSigMachine- wrote:
With a border and text should be on the left side just beside her head, in my opinion.

I don't know about the C4D's. Maybe someone better than me can criticize how you used them Neutral

Okay thanks, ill try with the text

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indi23 wrote:
Oh, and the hair looks poorly rendered.. maybe a light
smudging, or sumat?EDIT: Also, I like the pink ring around her..

I think thats my blurring, and thanks its a radial gradient of 5 colours. And ill try thinning the border.
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PostSubject: Re: Blending/C4D Practice   Blending/C4D Practice EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 3:26 pm

No, I was saying a light smudging to make the bad render less obvious, lolz Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Blending/C4D Practice   Blending/C4D Practice EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 3:37 pm

Hair is probably oversharpened.

That one part of a C4D that is crossing her hair on the left bottom side is a bit distracting.

I think that the text would look good on the left side where hair starts to seperate, and placed behind the C4Ds and behind that little line of hair (last letter or so partly covered)
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PostSubject: Re: Blending/C4D Practice   Blending/C4D Practice EmptyFri Aug 21, 2009 3:42 pm

rewritable wrote:
Hair is probably oversharpened.

That one part of a C4D that is crossing her hair on the left bottom side is a bit distracting.

I think that the text would look good on the left side where hair starts to seperate, and placed behind the C4Ds and behind that little line of hair (last letter or so partly covered)

Ill keep that in mind about the hair and try lowering the opacity on the C4D, also ill try the text there.

(All these changes will be done tomorow for some more CnC)

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PostSubject: Re: Blending/C4D Practice   Blending/C4D Practice EmptySat Aug 22, 2009 4:02 am

Okay so I have done some edits

Original:
Blending/C4D Practice Gc6e

Edit:
Blending/C4D Practice Gc6e1


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