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CnC away. Yes, it's meant to be dirty and grungy. Chaotic.

It's hard to read the text, and that draws more attention to it, imo

I don't think it draws attention toi it though it is fairly unreadable so yah. Otherwise it's pretty good with the one focal point though maybe have the text above the gun or something, closer to the focal point

Thanks guys. Anyone with a little more experience care to cnc? D:

Lolz, harsh XD

He's got a point though as I don't even make sigs so yah

Like most of your sigs, it looks screened (not the blending mode).
V1 bottom middle/right -- the brownish things -- bad.

Burn parts. Create more flow with C4Ds or filters.

Sexercise wrote:

CnC away. Yes, it's meant to be Chaotic.

LOL NUB @ geo

wat?

Geopetal wrote:

Like most of your sigs, it looks screened (not the blending mode).
V1 bottom middle/right -- the brownish things -- bad.

Burn parts. Create more flow with C4Ds or filters.

I know, a lot of people disagree with the "screened" look. What I'm getting at with that is "volume". Use any 3d application and apply a volume lighting configuration and you'll get a washed out look with it. I will continue to work with this style of lighting.

laziness is the middle right bottom, it will be fixed if i use this for classing.

flow is there, you've just gotta think about the velocity of a bullet hitting a solid object at a sharp angle. i'll work on it though, to emphasis that angle.

Flow is not obvious........and it should be IMO. I know what your talking about, but people shouldn't have to think or read your comment to realize there's flow.

Light source position is bad imo......no defined shadows. Everything is so bright.

Text is a bit far from the focal, which I presume is the face or gun. Use your blurs and sharpens properly to create more obvious depth. You might wanna do some render>light effects because the sig just seems a bit bright to me...

Top piece of text needs a new color/gradient. You haven't used the grey/black from the gun or girl yet, so I advise you to use that color for the text.

Overall nice.....but just lacks some things that I would have otherwise put in like C4Ds, pentooling etc etc. Seems a tad bit bland. But it's fine the way it is....nothing "wrong", but lots you can add.

6/10.

I like the concept, but yea, the flow is non existent to me. The light is annoying, brown edge is eh, and text needs to be more out of focus. I like the left side of the text, not the right.

Thanks for the input guys.

I disagree with comments at flow... it pretty much there and visible at first glance.

The brown looks BAD, so i prefer the 2nd one... it has better light glow placement.

And this tag just CANNOT have any shadows because the lightning is a bit behind the render.

There is not much depth... but that is also NOT required in this one.

Just a few more effects would look good... don't overdo though.

End: Much to add but not much to change.

Yea, depth isn't an issue cause I see the tag as something that should be flat.

I do see flow, but I think you should create some around the gun area.
Text on 2 is a little low.

You like the washed out look Sexer? It can be easily removed with Topaz Adjust or some adjustment layers.

bomp

new version

Much better... nicer colors.. better smudge on the right... but oversharpened at places and lightning around the hair is not working

two more vrsions lol

time for bed D: 4am rofl

left side of V5 and right side of V3

Yup. Left of 5 and right of the third one XD

It's alot better.